Production- Front page first draft

After constructing this draft I realised there were many things wrong with it for example:

• The colour scheme was not what I initially planned
• Layout: By using bubbles and strikes through some words the magazine does not look typical of other magazines in my genre
• Emptiness: the page looks really empty and I would imagine that readers would find it boring.
• Cover image: you can barely see the models face

Therefore I will alter things on this page.